I Won't Let You Leave. - Comments

If that happens, readers would be interested to learn about it.
Hahaha! As soon as he did it, the look on his face came to mind. When one comes to mind, I have a feeling it's going to be really good.
Knowing everything I know about it now, you absolutely do have every right to express in that manner about it. BTW You didn't need to apologize for that time you got angry and went off. The feeling I got from it is that you're extremely angry about it and needed to get some of that feeling out, so it was ok about getting angry.
Alright kool. I look forward to reading it when you are able to pick up where the direction of it was going. :) That is stressful when that happens.

@ VoiceOfTheSoul
True. If I ever get inspired to do more with it, I could down the line, which is kind of cool.
Hahah! I could so picture him doing that too. I want to write a story around him, but I just don't even know where to start, which sucks lol. But maybe I'll get motivated to write one.
True.
Yeah, I'm sure you can kind of guess what the one I posted on here is about, & that's kind of what a lot of my last poems were around.. Just the feelings I was going through from that screwed up situation, & some became very angry, which I guess I had every right to express that way.
I'm going to try to start writing & finishing the other one.. I'm still just at a loss of where I left off, & didn't know where I was going with it.. so it's kind of stressing me out now.

@ AestheticStar
That is true 'cause people would be like, "So what happens down the road with them?", "How did their date go?" & "What happened during that year gap?" so the door is open to additions.
Hahaha, I pictured him having his left elbow out the window, him leaning towards the door & blaring the horn with his right hand then looking at them with a smirk. I would've been laughing if I were in the backseat lol.
They give an insight of what goes on in my brain about the subject & what it means to me.
I have some that do express some kind of things that are pretty powerful & some that get out there but nothing too over driven.
If there are some that aren't expressive in a manner you don't want people to see, then post them. It'd be kool to check them out. I read that poem you have up & I think I totally understand it's reference.
Sometimes that type of content can drive a story if it's like a drama, romance type.
It says slacker! :P I'm kidding. I know there are reasons for the time away from trying to finish it. Glad it's back in process of being updated. :)

@ VoiceOfTheSoul
Thanks. :) I didn't want to make it seem rushed. And hey, it's always open to a second part or something if I ever felt the need.
Haha. I kind of made Dean seem like a dick in the story, lol. But I figured it suited him pretty good, not saying he's a dick, but he just seems like he'd be the guy that's like "Hurry up, let's go" lol.
That might not be a bad idea, if you felt like sharing them. I've thought about posting some personal poems, but then at the same time, with some of the things they express, it might not be best lol.
Haha, yeah pretty much any story I've written is usually pretty graphic when it comes to that stuff, if not more graphic. It all varies kind of.
Thanks. I don't know when I'll ever finish that one. I mean, I started it in like 2008 or 2009... And it's still not finished, if that says anything. I kind of went so long not writing it, I kind of forgot the direction I was going where I left off on. I know what the end was going to be, but starting back up is just hard to go from.

@ AestheticStar
:)
Yeah, there could have been a lot more to go into with their date, etc. but keeping it the way you did put enough for people get the idea of the possibility of how a fresh start at what true love is suppose to be.
Lmao I laughed at the horn blaring part. I totally pictured Dean's face while he was actually doing that & the reaction of Seth & Jeff, lmao.
I've thought about typing up a bunch of the empty mush letters I use to write that never were delivered or ones that were just made up. Pretty sad, finding love was like the top thing in my head back then.
Uh oh...hopefully. :P You ever write one that's ever gone the graphic detail of this one?
Haha you're the writer & include it if it'll fit the story. :P
Yeah, do it! The "Summertime Suicide" is good so far. I subscribed to it. :)

@ VoiceOfTheSoul
Thank you! I kind of hated the idea of just jumping a year, when I could have wrote about their "date" & all. But I just wanted it a short, & simple story, since I lack finishing long stories these days it seems lol. I have found so many unfinished stories in binders & notebooks.. it's really quite sad, 'cause some of them were really good ideas. :)
I'll try. I've had some ideas lately, especially an Ambrose based fic, that probably won't involve smut.. hopefully. Lol. I really need to pull away from that. xD It's like a bad habit. I'm trying to think of one fic I haven't written smut in... I think my Freddy/Elm Street one might be the only one if I'm remembering lol. And I think there's been maybe a few others surprisingly.
Haha, I'm glad it won't weird you out, but I'll try to keep it to a minimum. :P
Maybe. I did find the unfinished pages in a binder, so maybe I can try taking it out & finish it one of these nights when I'm bored, along with "Summertime Suicide", 'cause that one seemed to get some interest around here.

@ AestheticStar
Great ending. It really told of how they have been working with their fresh start at a better perspective of true love. The expression of true love is there with their willing to hold on after all the time that's passed being apart & embracing it within one another's company. Each step they're taking, they're discovering more of what it's real ideals are & what love is really meant to be. :)
Yeah definitely try to, your writing is enjoyable to read. :)
Haha, There shouldn't be any further worries about story smut weird'n me out. I did say I wanted to read it lol I would have felt bad because you were feeling bad.
Hahaha msg you like, "Uhhhh what did I just read?" lmao
Maybe down the line you can finish it. :)

@ VoiceOfTheSoul
Thank you, & I definitely wanted it to seem like they were more serious, & going into it all with a better perspective, & the real ideals of love & what it should be. :)
Hahah, I was worried it might be a little graphic & weird you out, but I'm glad it didn't. :P I would have felt bad if it had.
I'm gonna post the third & last chapter right now, 'cause I'm bored lol. I'll definitely try to write/post more. I'm still pissed I never finished my Elm Street fic that I started posting on here, 'cause a lot of people were into it. And then I quit posting, & that all went down the tubes lol.

Hahah.

@ AestheticStar
Welcome! :) It is a good idea, it's like a more depth look into the fresh start they both want to make by going on the date, etc. It would also cancel out possible questions like, if they would get back together or just hook up in the heat of passion from not seeing one another for a long time.
Lmao I was reading it & was like, "She has to be thinking that I'm pretty weird'd out by now." but I wasn't. It sounded pretty steamy, kinky & wild lmao
You're welcome! :) Can't wait. You should put more up & write more "cause I'd like to see more of your work. This is so far a good example of how good you can write. :)

lmao, yeah that episode & its sounds were something to be pretty weird'd out about. XD

@ VoiceOfTheSoul
Thank you! I figured it'd be a cute idea to make them want to be like an official couple with the date stuff, & I'm glad the smut didn't weird you out haha. When I was typing it up, I was like "This is so going to weird him out" lmao. But I'm glad it hadn't. I tried to keep it to a minimum & not drag it out too much or too long, or make multiple scenarios with it. I figured one flashback was enough. :P
Thanks! I'll definitely work to get it typed up either tonight, or Monday after Raw. :) It'll be pretty short, shorter than part 2, 'cause I think there's only about 8 pages to type up, or less.

Lmfao, I don't think I've seen that episode, but.. I can imagine what it sounded like. xD

@ AestheticStar
Really nice update. It sends out the sincerity message of two lovers willing to make beneficial sacrifice in order to be in a cleansed relationship. You can't find people willing to do that much these days.
Hahaha, the detailed smut didn't weird me out as you might have thought it would. It added to how much they love each other & the expression of passion each feels in one another's presence.
Look forward to the last part. :)

Hahaha, that particular episode was pretty frightening. He & Patrick working out but it sure didn't sound like it was iron they were pumping lmao

@ VoiceOfTheSoul
Hahah, I try to avoid it sometimes, but it just happened. Lol. I'm going to do an update. :)
Hahah, Spongebob can be a little frightening. xD

Haha you & your smut infused material :P Sometimes it's ok & could even add to the fic, never know.
I don't think it'll weird me out as much as one particular episode of Spongebob did. lol
I was thinking that something would happen once the two meet up after the phone call, since they haven't seen one another in quite some time.
Look forward to the update. :)

@ VoiceOfTheSoul
Hahah, yeah that's what I was refering to. And yeah, it's relatively graphic/detailed. But hopefully it won't weird you out too much. It's mostly just two flashback scenarios, so it's only going to be in the second chapter. Aside from that, there's nothing else. I kind of didn't even want to put it in there, but I thought maybe it'd be somewhat alright. I need to write one fic without smut though... eventually. Lol. :P
I'll try to do an update Saturday, since I get a rest day. :)

@ AestheticStar
You're welcome! I noticed the "smut" indication at the very end & don't think I'll be too weirded out, my mind is mature enough to handle it. Is it going to be pretty graphic or something? I subbed as I look forward to reading upon updates.

@ VoiceOfTheSoul
Thank you! It'll probably get a little weird for you though in the next chapter when I update. I might do so tonight, or tomorrow since I won't have much going on. It's kind of different from anything I've tried doing.

This is a nice read so far¡