You have some serious talent. It was very descriptive, and an extremely interesting topic. Keep writing, you're very good.
May 15th, 2008 at 06:11pm
I Really like this.
"The cold air whisked around her." I liked this line because it shows description.
You are very good at writing description.
"The relaxing environment never failed to deliver her peace, and it always had a therapeutic effect on her."
^ I can so relate to that :tehe:
Seriously, loved it.