This was so lovely!! I wish I could write like you; you're truly a blessed writer, in all aspects. I was scanning through Mibba magazine and I noticed that three drabbles, including my own, were featured in an article! Yours was in theres as well (and now I feel unworthy of my drabble mentioning because yours is truly fantastic and perfect) and I just wanted to let you know if you haven't seen it ^_^ Here's a link!
I really enjoyed this piece. The short sentences just built up the anticipation for me and the ending was a bit surprising but very well done. The last line was so impactful.
Thank you lovely(;