A One Night Stand, Lingered to a Fling - Comments

  • SaraHorlyk

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    Sorry.. Double post.
    December 1st, 2013 at 11:02pm
  • SaraHorlyk

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    Niiice one! I loved this chapter! :D
    I don't why I've never commented on this story, because I've been subscribing for a long time - and this story is amazing!! Keep on writing love :D
    December 1st, 2013 at 11:02pm
  • ColourfulTears

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    I loved this chapter :') it was so fun to write but yes, its important also for later on. The next chapter is up now :)

    @ TheSun
    November 20th, 2013 at 02:41pm
  • TheSun

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    You my lady are an evil genius. I just assumed it was Oli she was in bed with. How wrong I was!!! Hahah.
    November 20th, 2013 at 04:00am
  • ColourfulTears

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    Okay I low this review more than anything :). Yeah at first its like a lil rubdown of how they got to be friends then her moving to london. Now its onto detailed chapters a lot of stuff will be more accurate!

    The fact you like small details makes me so happy because thinking of them takes time, its nice to know its appreciated :)

    Feel free to comment any time, I love reading feedback with detail!

    Next update tomorrow :)

    @ TheSun
    November 17th, 2013 at 04:38am
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    At first I felt like this was moving too fast but, now it's perfect. I love the secret admirer cards. I'm pretty sure that's like every woman's dream to have a secret admirer lol. I'm also very attached to the idea that the poems he wrote her a being used for songs. I love when people incorporate lyrics into their stories. Makes for excellent reading. Anyway I'll shut up. Just know that I adore this story and look forward to reading more!
    November 16th, 2013 at 09:12pm
  • ColourfulTears

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    @ TheSun

    Thank you! I just came up with a quick idea and it expanded :) more updates coming tonight :)
    November 13th, 2013 at 06:54pm
  • TheSun

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    I like this a lot :)
    November 13th, 2013 at 06:14pm