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  • The Forest of Dreams

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    absolutely LOVE it! I never would have thought of such a brilliant idea with the speaking in lyrics. Ingenious. Im also a HUGE My Chemical Romance fan so that made this story alot more enjoyable lol. I just loved your description and you did an excellent job at giving an abusive household atmoshphere. Needless to say, this story greatly impressed me and i do hope you continue it =)
    April 30th, 2011 at 04:09am
  • just gone okay

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    More please?
    November 7th, 2010 at 08:50am
  • Arabella-

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    I LOVE IT!!! I just read to the last chapter, and alot of the time i was laughing so hard my mom had to keep checking on me to see if i had gone insane or something...But it was amazing and i really hope you update soon
    October 21st, 2010 at 12:38am
  • SiionaraXOxooxOX

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    OMFG. This is awesome. I want more! Please? xoxo beth
    September 29th, 2010 at 02:55pm
  • figwmwrtbb

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    yay! its an update! :) im retarded
    anyway, i love tiv in this chapter '...holy fro...' that cracked me up. he's such a fanboy.
    i love it and i hope you update it again soon
    January 2nd, 2010 at 06:53am
  • demolitionlover13

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    This is amazing.
    I love how you come up with My Chem lyrics for everything she has to say..
    I guess thats kinda one of the main points, though..
    Hahahaha, whatever. xD

    LOVE the story.
    Update soon?
    January 2nd, 2010 at 06:19am
  • pretty ood

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    And I have a new expression.

    I love Tiv.
    January 1st, 2010 at 11:52pm
  • bruise pristine

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    "I'm okay now..."?
    Is that supposed to mean...
    I'M SO CONFUSED!
    -Isn't stupid. Is just really confused.-
    January 1st, 2010 at 11:02pm
  • B!tcheslovevixen

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    haha "OH MY FUCKING UNICORNS!" I <3 tiv.

    Hes my favorite,

    Update soon?
    January 1st, 2010 at 08:55pm
  • Hezzarther

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    O:
    Tiv's going crazy.
    January 1st, 2010 at 08:39pm
  • yippeedoo

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    Yay an update :D
    She's getting adopted :DDD
    January 1st, 2010 at 06:53pm
  • mindblind

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    Hoorah!
    Update! :D
    I love Tiv and his fangirlness<3
    Update was lovedddd<33
    Xoxo. Tina.
    January 1st, 2010 at 05:36pm
  • adoration

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    "Well Gerard, he got attached and..."

    Best.
    Line.
    Ever.
    <3
    This was adorable!
    Tiv made my day. XD
    Update soon, loverrrrrr.
    January 1st, 2010 at 05:34pm
  • Hezzarther

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    I really like this.
    Update soon?
    January 1st, 2010 at 08:33am
  • pretty ood

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    I betcha someones gonna adopt her first! Naw, that would be just plain mean.

    Heyy, it would be funny if she kept talking in lyrics if/when they adopted her. Like, soo funny.

    Funny-ness galore at MitreRexi
    November 3rd, 2009 at 06:16am
  • bruise pristine

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    Tiv had better let her get adopted.
    I mean, honestly, it'd be great for her.
    And...they could homeschool her and shit.
    November 3rd, 2009 at 01:41am
  • demolitionlover13

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    *girlie screams*
    I LOVE THIS!
    November 3rd, 2009 at 12:57am
  • mindblind

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    Wow.
    It's a sad sign when I can't remember what happened.
    But I liked it.
    And Gerard did whaaaaa?
    I really gotta go reread.
    Xoxo. Tina.
    November 3rd, 2009 at 12:39am
  • pretty ood

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    If you don't update this, I'll have to kidnap you and make you my own personal writer. *gives cookie* TOO SLEEP AND BEYOND... *yawns*
    November 2nd, 2009 at 01:41pm
  • just gone okay

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    Great chapter! I really hope they invite her along or soooomething! They totally hit it off!
    October 18th, 2009 at 04:43am
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