I'm gonna love going to school with you everyday, baby girl. But definitely gonna miss seeing you prance around in that uniform everyday. Oh my god!!!
Also, you might want to try seperating each paragraph and seperate the dialogue as well, so it's easy on the eyes and doesn't seem like a huge blob to some readers. :)
Oh my god!!!
Also, you might want to try seperating each paragraph and seperate the dialogue as well, so it's easy on the eyes and doesn't seem like a huge blob to some readers. :)
I love this story so far!