Dead of Winter - Comments

this still makes me cry... jesus... so well written :')

This is beautiful. You're an amazing writer. Ugh. The tears.

@ RavenArtist93
wow! thank you, sweetheart! that was really kind of you!!

Amazing one shot.
And congrats for winning 1st place!
You really deserved it.
You are a fantastic writer :)

This is honestly one of the best things, you have ever written, at least one-shot in my eyes.

It kind of starts out like, in a way it fools you what he's talking. You don't realize in a way that it is past tense or present with his memories of her as she does what she used to do. It all in his head, I love that. It makes a story so much deeper to me.

It like she's there with him in spirit, it's in a way like nothing has changed as she's there with him and it probably makes it easier for him to deal with that time around christmas.

Also he literally has a real part of her with him, the cute adorable daughter. I guess that helps relief the pain of christmas yet makes it harder to move on without her.

This is written to so heartfelt. I love the emotions, the many different ones radiating from this story and the different moments. It all blends in so well and while he struggles, they all try to make it feel as normal as possible in a sense.

That ending though, I felt so much for Brian. So sad and tragic, yet beautiful. Like I said one of the best things you've ever written.

@ emkayyy
i told you tragic, not horrific.

Love love love & you're welcome! Also, I did not want them to eat anyone I was confused on the topic.

This made me so sad! It is very well written and seriously made my chest ache for Brian. Good job and good luck in your contest:)

God, the tears. This is beautiful. Just beautiful...

Loved it! And LUCK! <3

Oh my god, I'm literally in tears and it takes a lot for me to cry.

So much emotion and really well written :)