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When it gave me a My Chemical Romance fan fiction apposed to a One Direction fan fiction, you don't know how happy I was. I love the plot of the story. The way you built the characters to make them fit to the plot is just amazing because you still kept the good parts about each character. I love the friendship between Gerard and Frank. I love the layout too. I love this fan fiction just as much as I love My Chemical Romance now :) Keep up the good work :)

Aww I love their interactions:) can't wait for the next update- - I wanna know what gerard got on the advertisement assignment!!!

I adore their friendship so much. <3 I feel for Frank's family, I really do. I'm glad that he has Gerard in his life, he needed a friend and I'm glad that they are hanging out :)) Happy Thanksgiving!!!!!!!!

That's good to know! I can't even imagine what's beyond F&P's past, you got me curious. 50+ chapters more sounds like a dream, actually, I never enjoyed reading (band members) fictional stories until I got to read frerard's ones... Thank you for replying!

ps.: don't you feel the need to worry for us, take your time !

@ undeadyouth
I know, but still. Any unwanted sexual encounters is enough to ruin you, Frank didn't want this at all, didn't ask for it, he was forced into a sexual act and... yeah. That's what I meant. :/

@ lizzicleromance

He didn't actually fuck him, just making sure that's obvious. Unless you're just calling sex in general. I'm just making sure that it's obvious no penetration was actually achieved haha.

WOW. Oh, Frankie. Poor, poor Frankie. Not only did life fuck him by making him blind, but now some asshole really did fuck him and that really just makes my heart hurt for him. I'm so glad he has a friend like Gerard, and that they ran into each other that night. I adore every bit of this and I can't wait for the next one :)

@ shinkyo

Unfortunately, I didn't know how to stretch it out in order to keep the pace at a marginal length. There is a reason behind the earliness in the whole Paul/Frank thing but no, this story is not ending anytime soon. This will most likely stretch out to at least a good 50 chapters minimum. I would say, as a hint, that this is a small piece of a bigger piece hence why I brought it on so early in the story.

I saw how things progressed quite fast in the story, I did thought Paul would do something bad to him but not this bad or this soon.

Don't take it the wrong way, i like this pace however I wonder if this story will end soon? I hope this is not the case, because we (readers) see a great potential for a longer story.

Great updates!

I adore this story

Ohmagod I love how frequently you update !!!! This is like my fave fic to read right now, srsly. I cannot wait for the next update!! Poor Frankie (and mikey too holy shit that was horrible). On another note though I love the way g and f interact, it's really sweet. And frank learning about old people lol

Pls update soon!<3

This is absolutely one of my most favorite stories, and I'm so happy you update so frequently!!! Thank you for another fabulous update, I love how Gerard was bent out of shape about Frank not calling... and Frank indeed want to meet up... ahhhh I can't wait for more!! <3

I was glad that Gerard took some action and you do describe well how a lonely person feels. Props to you for updating fast, you're aewsome!

Another amazing update :)) Yeah, Gerard is lonely... time to go on a Frankie hunt, I do believe!! :D

!!!two beautimus updates in the same day?? Yay!! With every paragraph I love this more:) oh and go gerard for knocking all of his work to the floor, he just earned some major fuck-yeah points from meXD can't wait for the next update!!

I like this story a lot.

My goodness, I have such chills from how freaking amazing and original this is. I absolutely adore this so far, I can't wait to see how you develop their relationship and these characters!!!! :)) Amazing start so far, more when you can please!

I'm enjoying this story a lot. I've always wanted to read a story in which Frank is blind, even though I don't know why... and you're doing a great job already!

Ooh this is really good so far! The way you write is splendidXD Gerard's character is cool so far and I feel pretty bad for him with all the work he has to do.. and frank seems really awesome too! I've never read anything where one of them is blind so I'm really interested in where this is gonna go! Pls update again soon!!

i like it already,cant wait to keep reading:)