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  • pigsandpurple

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    Really interesting
    November 24th, 2013 at 12:15am
  • pigsandpurple

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    Really interesting
    November 24th, 2013 at 12:14am
  • Writer in the Rye

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    @ domi823
    The *cries because* comment I replied to was for you! Forgot to tag you in it!!
    November 22nd, 2013 at 04:22am
  • Writer in the Rye

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    @ takahe.angel
    Thank you so much! Your comment truly made me smile ^_^

    God Bless!

    xoxo
    November 19th, 2013 at 12:52am
  • Queen of the Clouds

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    This was really great - I love the touching way it's been written. And that last line is just perfect. It just completes the piece so wonderfully.
    November 18th, 2013 at 08:40pm
  • Writer in the Rye

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    *cries because you're too sweet and dear goodness how does my writing even compare to yours in the least omg this is crazy that you find my writing good and comprehensible wow I can't stop smiling but now I'm slightly frowning because this is a long verb indications and I'm abusing the amount of words logically able to fit in between two asterisks*

    ^_^ Arms

    God Bless!

    Xoxo
    November 18th, 2013 at 04:43am
  • Dom.

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    *cries because your writing is so beautiful and I'm jealous and ugh*
    November 18th, 2013 at 03:20am
  • Writer in the Rye

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    @ midnight sunshine x
    heheehehehe I don't know what to say to you that hasn't already been said! You're the sweetest ^_^ I always save all of your comments on my phone so I can read them whenever I please :) Your comment has me blushing and everything :) I've never written a drabble before so to get such a positive response is crazy! As you can tell (probably from this reply) I suck at being concise so I'm SO glad you liked it!!

    Arms

    God Bless Hug

    xoxo
    November 17th, 2013 at 10:46pm
  • midnight sunshine x

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    Wow. Just wow. This is so poignant, so powerful, so perfect and the descriptions you use are just amazing. This piece just made me smile from ear to ear. I've literally read this about 10 tens over and over and it's just perfection, can I just fangirl over this right now?! Wonderful, as always Mr. Green
    November 17th, 2013 at 09:54pm
  • Writer in the Rye

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    @ FacingTheBeastInside
    Oh my goodness! Your comment absolutely made my entire day ^_^ I was just thinking about how all these romance novels are so unrealistic and then I realized how happy couples are when they're right. I'm really bad at drabbles and this is my first one I've published on here so your comment really, really made me smile!! Arms Have a lovely day!

    God Bless!!

    xoxo
    November 17th, 2013 at 09:52pm
  • Don'tFearTheReaper

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    I really like how simple this idea is, but how powerful you made it. Your last lines made me smile, how you went from no one believing you to no one believing books. You made that simply transfer of words so that "you" are now the book. And how your story is no more believable than all these romance novels out there. You are very talented with your one hundred and some odd words here. And I loved this so much.
    November 17th, 2013 at 08:58pm