Minnesota Girl - Comments

@blue. Thank you! You can't go wrong with The Beatles, you just can't.

By the beginning of the end of this chapter, I was already trying to hide my grin behind my sleeve seeing as I'm at work. It was just too adorable. The way he would chuckle after she said something in her sleepy voice... Shut up with that mad cuteness. So I thought that was as cute as it was going to get, which was pretty damn cute. BUT THEN, BUUUUT THEN! He was singing the BEATLES in the car and one of their sweetest songs and it's the perfect, absent-mind, sing a long lullaby song AND YOU PUT IT IN THIS CHAPTER and oh my goodness.

You nailed it.

@WhereMyDemonsHide Thank you! I'm glad you're enjoying it!

My gosh... I was speechless reading this. It's brilliant how confident Billie is in the beginning and they are at each others throats. The chapters are amazing! Keep it up! You've got an permeant reader!

I was grinning from start to finish on this chapter! When they were in the bathroom doctoring up her bloody nose... And then a kiss... And then a kiss on the nose? Just like, shut up with that cuteness.

Can't wait for the next update. :)

VERY VERY GOOD KEEP GOING ^~^

@blue. Thank you!! I'm going for realistic and I'm glad you're enjoying it! :) it was pretty awkward, huh?

I logged on hoping to see you update, and you did! Either it is you or me who has perfect timing. Needless to say, reading this chapter made my day and I can't wait for the next one!

I like how this chapter is completely realistic too. Because you could have gone in the direction where Billie Joe gets her a job and she's overwhelmed by his kindness and praises the ground he walks on and that might even make out. But you didn't. You stated clearly that she was hesitant about being a waitress again and everything. It was also realistic because I think if I had been in that situation, I would have been just as reluctant and awkward. Actually, I KNOW I would be like that because I was definitely getting some second hand embarrassment from reading this.

So obviously, you're doing a fantastic job. Can't wait to see how Billie Joe and Sadie pan out. :)

@ blue.
Thank you, sweet one!

God bless your soul. God bless it with flowers and rainbows and cheesecake and everything lovely. One, you write wonderfully. Two, you saved my life this evening BECAUSE: it takes me AGES to find a Billie story I actually like, or one that isn't written by a twelve year old, or one that is just genuinely good. And that is the absolute worst feeling because I love Green Day fics, but I feel like they're just dying out and it's almost suffocating. I love that this story is set when Billie is still young and obnoxious and everyone's still struggling just to make it. You're doing a fantastic job with all the imagery and dialog. And, I am just head over heels with this story. Please keep it up. So lovely. :)

I'm glad she finally sees that billie isn't a jackass lol

THIS IS SO GOOD I LOVE YOUR WRITING YOU ARE AMAZING, UPDATE??? <3

I love it!! update soon please!! can't wait for it!!

@NerdGlasses Yes, I do. :)

Loving this so so so very much! But you know that already ;)

Ooh kill em
I knew it was coming but I was still proud of her sass.

@lovely disaster Thank you!

I like it! I can't wait for more!!!!

Thank you! I love it! @heatherlight

@ LastAmericanGirl
made the layout! here it is!