Talk Nerdy to Me - Comments

  • Chapter one

    “Can you just…not be you for ten seconds? You’re embarrassing me.”

    Oh, how I wish my parents could do the same sometimes. But it's basically in their job description to embarrass their children every one and a while. I look forward to having the same right when I eventually have kids too. Hahaha. I also find this line somewhat amusing because the characters themselves are in essence "not being themselves" or at least the image that fans generally see. It's a little difficult adjusting to reading them as completely different guys... but it's not completely impossible. It's definitely believable so far!

    Brian seems optimistic, yet pessimestic about his college experiance. I mean, one moment he seems excited and happy about growing up and being in a more inviting and understand environment, but then in the next he's looking forward to hiding himself away from fellow students. I suppose it's hard to shake off your tendency to be shy and paranoid that you'll be the victim of someone's joke, I'm sure it will take time.

    Chapter two

    Bahahaha! Wow, Zacky really is a nerd... fantasizing about having sex with Wonder Woman. Ah, well... least she's hot Wink

    Oh my god! I did NOT expect his mother to walk on him masturbating.... wow. That's just horrifying! I dunno what's worse, his embarrassment or the far too calm way she reacted... which to me is a little bit creepy. Jeez!

    I can't blame him for wanting to get away from his mother... holy hell, is she over the top! I'd want to run away from her too. Hahaha.

    Awww, I find it so incredibly adorable that the number one thing to do on his list is build a robot... whilst getting laid is a little further down. Hahaha. It's so endearing.

    "...he tinkles in his bed sometimes.”

    Oh. My. God! Just... wow. Poor Zacky!! His mother is unbearable... I'd have forbidden her from coming to drop me off. Hahaha.

    Excellent start, I'm looking forward to the next installment!
    November 29th, 2013 at 01:52pm
  • Oh my god! I'm about to burst a spleen from laughing too damn hard! Holy fucking shit! I love this! Just the images of both Bri and Zee as nerds is too good to be true.
    November 29th, 2013 at 06:18am
  • Hahahahaha u had me laughing out loud while I'm waiting for Target to open up for the black friday sales lol this chapter was so fucken hilarious!!!!
    November 29th, 2013 at 03:53am
  • That last line...I died!!!! Oh my goodness!!!! Can't wait for more of this :) it is amazing so far!!!
    November 29th, 2013 at 02:27am
  • This is amazing. I can't stop laughing, make it stop it hurts!! hahah love it!

    “You’ve got everything?” His mother began to follow him as he made his way through the sea of people, her arms flailing wildly as she tried to get her son’s attention. “I put a rape alarm in your bag along with a can of mace!” I chuckled in this part and the soda I was driking literally escaped my lips, don't even get me started on the last statement in which you wrote that Zacky still tinkles his bed sometimes, dear this is amazing! Hugs, RP
    November 28th, 2013 at 11:28pm
  • lmfao Oh my god!!! I couldn't stop laughing!
    November 28th, 2013 at 11:23pm
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    I love your comments! lmfao
    November 28th, 2013 at 10:48pm
  • OH.MY.GOD!! are you trying to kill me from trying not to laugh out loud? parents are asleep upstairs so wouldn't be so great if I just went into hysterics.. holy shit!! this is just too fuckin' funny!!

    Hell, he hadn’t even had his first kiss let alone anything else. A half asleep, half-drunk Brian groping him in the dark, did not count. -pmsl!! aawe bribri feelin' up zacky Ha Ha

    and his mother!! dear lord!! walking in on him just when he shoots his load ROTFL!! oh dude..!! i'm in stitches!

    I frickin' love this so much after just two chapters and can't wait to see how geeky-cute the others will be Mr. Green and what adventures college will bring them on Very Happy
    November 28th, 2013 at 10:44pm
  • oh.my.god! papa gates!! i actually had tears in my eyes at the end because of him.. poor brian!! lmao Mr. Green can't wait for more- this sounds so interesting already- all the guys together in college Mr. Green
    November 24th, 2013 at 11:18am
  • Loved the first chapter! I can't wait for the next update! :D
    November 24th, 2013 at 02:38am
  • Great first chapter, ZV! (:

    I have to say that I absolutely love your version of Brian Haner Sr., because you really seemed to capture some of his humor and I just loved the little jokes. Especially Zacky's little line right toward the end. Butttt maybe that's because I'm a Zacky fan, who knows?

    Seriously though, I'm super excited to see what the lot of you have planned for the coming chapters, because I think this is going to be an absolutely epic story. (:

    *also, I must sympathize with poor Brian for dropping his comic book and panicking about it possibly being damaged. I do the exact same thing whenever I'm reading mine, and mine aren't even signed or anything. Although, I have to point out, from my own nerdy experience, that comic books totally aren't as descriptive as that opener was, but that said I totally loved your description and, again, Bri's reaction was priceless.
    November 24th, 2013 at 02:28am
  • This is a whole different take on Avenged n I love it!! Please update again soon :)
    November 24th, 2013 at 12:50am
  • Mr Twinkles!!!! Oh my god that was hilarious. Poor Brian!! Can't wait to see what happens next :) really great so far!!!
    November 24th, 2013 at 12:31am
  • Gaaaaah updaaaaateeee
    November 24th, 2013 at 12:25am
  • This is awesome! Mr Twinkles? hahaha so hilarious! love it!
    November 24th, 2013 at 12:13am
  • Exciting!!!
    November 18th, 2013 at 11:28pm
  • Very interesting, can't wait and YAY! first commentator!
    November 18th, 2013 at 10:45pm
  • November 18th, 2013 at 10:45pm