A Risk Worth Taking - Comments

course, doll~

@ JamieAllOver.
Yeah, im from the UK so some times writing as an American is a little tricky because your words are a lot different to mine, but I totally understand what you mean. Thanks for letting me know. It really helps :)

this is a cute story and all, but there're a few things:
•this fic, to me at least, moves extraordinarily fast. they're in love after a single day?? they move in with no prior planning?? they fly across the ocean on about twelve hours notice??
•zack, in the character info, is listed as straight yet appears to be gay
•both rian and zack have kind of just... disappeared?
•it says jack graduated in the spring, then goes on spring break? a spring break that lasts more than a month?
•maybe it's just me, but i don't think any mother would suggest her son and sons boyfriend have sex, never mind so much as approve of that kind of relationship?? it just doesn't sound very... plausible??
•you use 'led' in place of words like lied, lay, laying, etc.
•a lot of words like 'ourselves' 'wherever' 'whenever' or 'himself' you put spaces in between, and 'his self' doesn't make any sense unless saying something along the lines of 'his self-esteem'
•a lot of random words are capitalized throughout, and there are commas placed where they shouldn't be
•you use ' in place of a ". a friend said that's how people in different countries indicate dialogue, so maybe that's just the case
•in your third person pov, you go back and forth between third and first a few times

from what i can see, you live over in the UK, and the whole 'grammar rule' thing may be different, so feel free to ignore me if that's the case

awe yeaaaaah! smut!! :))

Well shits about to get real....

@ MandiCX
Oh shit, sorry. I was in the process of writing a new chapter and I've accidentally submitted it instead of saving it... :L

What is this 5 sentences

IT'S GONE! THE FUCKING LAYOUT IS FINALLY GONE! (Please say it has?) x

@ trottablogga you have to change the story layout back to defalt. Its gone proper messed up... :'(

UGH I WANT TO READ THIS BUT IT WON'T LET ME

UGH I WANT TO READ THIS BUT IT WON'T LET ME

Can't update until Friday as I have to prepare for a drama assessment :( x

Yea it's this stupid layout thing that wont come of. I don't know what to do about it :'(

Woah, I don't know if its my browser but the story is all cluttered together and I can't read any of it

I have no idea. D:

Ohh come on! Another storm? I'm not sure If I can handle it. Yes we wanted Jalex back and we want them back together permanently

@ Jacky_Barakitten
Oh shit, i tried to change it back. Do you know how i can get rid of it?

:| The new background is making my phone have a word spazuim

merrikat is adorable but not even close to as adorable as jalex

Okay, I'm getting rid of Merrikat as we speak!!!!! You guys are obviously lusting over Jalex (so am I!) so I'll see what I can muster up to get them back together ;) I think you'll be pleasantly surprised...