There's Something in the Wind. - Comments

@ Vixyn Of Shadows
I'm so glad I'm not the only one that does that, haha. XD that's good. Lol.

@ AshleyJinxxBiersack
I still misspell stuff even when I proof read lol. Simple mistake :). Plus it doesn't count against anything lol

@ Vixyn Of Shadows
Forfucksake. .-. ~facepalm~
I'll do it before college tomorrow. It's late in the UK, I'm not on my laptop and I'm too tired to proof read right now xD haha.

Thank you though. I'm glad you like it. :3

There's a misspelled part that needs to be fixed. You wrote bush instead of but.

"he said, patting his chest" might wanna change that too. I've done that so many times myself lol.

All in all this is a very fabulous and well written oneshot considering the time frame you had. It was so creepy and eerie and I loved it.