Hey, i'm here to judge my Just A Text Away contest, sorry it took so long
You can congradulate yourself, you found a way to make me shred a tear not that it's that hard to do, but it normally doesn't happen while reading.
What can I say except that I simply love it. It's simple and yes, it is based on a plot that we often see written about. But this one had something to it that made me love it so much.
I really love how we can feel exactly what Jesse is feeling through every lines. It makes perfect to me how he would feel like that at the certain moment of the story. Which makes me really love how you included the time frame. I like that everything is happening at the same time. I love how it makes it truely easy to believe what is happening because it seems to be moving just like real life is, and not too fast. Which means that since your story has the tone done so well, the descriptions are perfectly stop on too.
And the way Jesse interact with Bryan, just seems so like I would interact with someone in his state of mind.
I also smiled at how you included your sentence in it.
You can congradulate yourself, you found a way to make me shred a tear not that it's that hard to do, but it normally doesn't happen while reading.
What can I say except that I simply love it. It's simple and yes, it is based on a plot that we often see written about. But this one had something to it that made me love it so much.
I really love how we can feel exactly what Jesse is feeling through every lines. It makes perfect to me how he would feel like that at the certain moment of the story. Which makes me really love how you included the time frame. I like that everything is happening at the same time. I love how it makes it truely easy to believe what is happening because it seems to be moving just like real life is, and not too fast. Which means that since your story has the tone done so well, the descriptions are perfectly stop on too.
And the way Jesse interact with Bryan, just seems so like I would interact with someone in his state of mind.
I also smiled at how you included your sentence in it.
Overall, I just love this piece so much.