Wasting All These Tears (On You) - Comments

this was really good, it was really intense too! But I loved the way you wrote it, and I enjoyed it and how it tied together, which it did quite nicely.

You're really good at drabbles! Well done, I wish I could write drabbles like you, you manage to capture a small meaning of something and make it more detailed and better. Great read.

No one mourns the wicked.
I like how you started out strong with that one sentence.

You had me wrapped around your finger. I died to make you happy.
I would suggest connecting these two sentences, it will flow better.

You lived, then died.
A strong statement coming from the narrator.

I killed a person. I killed you.
I believe you should have ended this here. It's the statement this drabble leads to, that the narrator killed a person, the person who brought so much pain to the narrator.

You have a good way around with words though. Good job!

~Marian.