I Forgive You - Comments

I think this was good, but it looks like it could use some work to it. But I enjoyed what you have so far :D

This was good but it needs a lot of improving, there was a lot of mistakes, I'd point them out to be helpful but XXXataktoulaXXX already has and it's up to you to change them :)

I still remembered the night you probably forgot.
With probably forgot being the keywords.

Everyone there asked if I realized what I did. Of course I realized it. That's why I did it.
I suggest connecting the last two senteces to help the flow.

I can honestly say that the last paragraph confused me. The part where she talked about her feelings and I mean this part, I hated you. But slowly my hatred for you turned to like and eventually love. I wasn't "In love" with you. No, that was the last thing I needed. I loved you still nonetheless because you saved me. You saw me where I was and while I yelled at you to get out when I really wanted you to stay, you helped me. You also have to connect some of the sentences at this part and put some commas in the right places.

I like how you ended this with the last statement being the title of this drabble.

~Marian.