Just Keep Waiting - Comments

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I really liked this. I never really read drabbles because I don't like how short they are, but I'm glad I read yours! I like the emotion behind them but it is so sad how he never came back! And how she is still waiting... :(
Really liked this though and keep writing!

This is really good, I liked the emotion the only thing that I think needed improving was grammar because you could have placed commas here and there or took one or two out for it to make since, but otherwise I liked this one because I could relate to it.

To be honest, I don't really know if I like this.

I think it has a lot of holes in the emotion department. This person is obviously waiting for someone, who I can only assume passed away due to the terrible weather.

It kind of reminds me of Miranda Lambert's song Over You, but it doesn't have that real emotional kick.

To me the only real emotional kick, the real grip was the very last line.

But I mean as far as grammar and flow is concerned it's spot on.

By the way, you should mark this as completed, cause it shows as on-going.

Of course nothing was ever going to stop you from doing what you wanted. Regardless of consequences.
That sentence shows show stubborn that person is and how he/she always does whatever he/she wants.

I obeyed you, you were stubborn once you came to a decision.
I feel like there's something missing between the comma and the rest fo the sentence. It just doesn't feel right, re-word it maybe?

That was three years ago, I'm still waiting.
I totally love the ending. Well done!

The imagery in this piece is great, and I think that might be the second favorite from your drabble collection, with the first one being the one with the bells.

~Marian.