I thought this story was simply outstanding and you did such a wonderful job with Diction and theme and integrating of the word. I thought it was really, really well done and you truly embraced the six word story, no doubt about it! I thought it was just wonderful and I honestly couldn't help but love it.
I wish that the title had been a little more throughout, the title seemed to be a slight throw away compared to everything else you produced.
I thought this story was simply outstanding and you did such a wonderful job with Diction and theme and integrating of the word. I thought it was really, really well done and you truly embraced the six word story, no doubt about it! I thought it was just wonderful and I honestly couldn't help but love it.
I wish that the title had been a little more throughout, the title seemed to be a slight throw away compared to everything else you produced.
I was very, very pleased with this story!