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  • neon.band.aids.

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    He's starting to really see her differently. He even made a special trip to spend time with her. She needs to speak up though. She has a right to know why he's dragging her around like this behind his girlfriends back like his dirty little secret.
    March 29th, 2014 at 04:55am
  • Thatmom

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    That aha moment when the light bulb brightens is the reason I teach!!! You nailed that:)
    March 29th, 2014 at 03:49am
  • neon.band.aids.

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    He knows it's just not right. And he's scared because it felt right and real with her, even that memory showed him that. He's even more scared that her and Matt seem to be right as well. Update again soon!
    March 28th, 2014 at 04:13am
  • realdeal18

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    Someone still ain't over James! This is getting interesting! Can't wait for more!
    March 27th, 2014 at 06:40pm
  • Leslie.

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    JaAaAames!!!!
    March 27th, 2014 at 05:34am
  • neon.band.aids.

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    Oooh, James is getting testy and crossing boundaries. I wonder how he'll feel if she accidentally stays the night. He'll probably flip his lid. Can't wait for more!
    February 20th, 2014 at 07:20pm
  • neon.band.aids.

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    Oooh I hope she turns on the charm for Matt and James gets jealous! Can't wait to see how she fights back! Update again soon!
    February 4th, 2014 at 07:32pm
  • Leslie.

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    James needs to not
    February 4th, 2014 at 08:12am
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    @ Jayess
    Her name is Sam. Her nickname, which James normally calls her is Sammy. I was pretty sure I referred to that early. But thank you for your opinion.
    February 3rd, 2014 at 04:45am
  • Jayess

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    Typical; he doesn't want her but he doesn't want anyone else to have her either. Possessive asshole. If he wanted her, he wouldn't be in a relationship (or even just having sex) with another woman. Can't have it all, James. End your relationship with Shayna, apologize for being a possessive asshole, and earn your purported friend's trust back. Or let her go. You don't get to feel like that anymore, you ended the relationship. You don't get to know her feelings or thoughts, you don't get to feel possessive or jealous. You didn't want her anymore, you can't treat her like you do. It's not fair to her or your girlfriend. Remember Shayna? Your ex does.

    You know, you've only referred to your main character by name twice, and the first time was in the third chapter. Is it Sam or Sammy?
    February 1st, 2014 at 06:27pm
  • Leslie.

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    HEHEHEHHEHEHE JAAAAMES U IN FOR IT
    January 26th, 2014 at 08:19pm
  • neon.band.aids.

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    Maybe he'll realize that she loved him and agreed to breakup because it's not what he wanted. Update again soon!
    January 24th, 2014 at 06:44pm
  • Leslie.

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    James though -_-
    January 10th, 2014 at 11:43pm
  • realdeal18

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    Love this story! James needs to decide what he wants! So both of them can move on or get back together! And I seriously hope they get back together! I love the drama great work! Smile
    January 10th, 2014 at 06:23pm
  • neon.band.aids.

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    I like that he's still possessive and worrisome. James knows she's a great catch and he's worried she won't be there for him to get whenever he's finally ready again. But if he's still able to be friends after dating for that long then maybe she should consider the possibilities that either he still loves her or he never really loved her at all. Their breakup should make their friendship harder than normal. Update again soon! Love it!
    January 10th, 2014 at 08:14am
  • neon.band.aids.

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    I wonder how this will all work out... Update again soon!
    December 9th, 2013 at 07:47am
  • Leslie.

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    HJGFGIJGFDFG, JUST KISS HER
    December 3rd, 2013 at 05:36pm
  • realdeal18

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    Oh my god this is getting good! She is so in love with him! And is so jealous can't wait to see what happens next! Good work!
    December 3rd, 2013 at 08:00am
  • realdeal18

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    I like this story already! Can't wait to see how this all goes down!
    November 23rd, 2013 at 07:56pm