Ash - Comments

I must say that I absolutely love this. I have such a shitty attention span nowadays and I can hardly ever focus on something long enough to read. so the way this way written made it so easy for me to read and actually be engaged. And that's really great. And it's not just the way- the choppiness- that I like, I think your style, word choice, all of that is just beautiful. Although, I just wish it would've went somewhere because I think a story like this has great potential to be something absolutely fantastic.

this is really great. really, really great.

Oh god wtf did he do with that pencil?

Seriously I've never read any of the Crank books and I think the reason was because I thought they were all poems. But if they're all like this I'll have to check them out.

The style is very different and very unique and I have mixed feelings about it but I think for the most part I like it. I like everything you write though so it's no surprise. Unhealthy relationships are seriously the most interesting things to read about which is probably not good but really they are so insightful and you can tell so much about one person by the way they handle themselves in a relationship. Whether they're strong or weak and I think she's strong but scared. She'd leave if she absolutely had to and if there was no other choice but she has a choice and she wants to stay. At least that's what I'm getting from this. Wonderful job lady.

I really love the format of this; I don't think I've seen anything written like it before, and it works really well. It flows together so well. And the development of your characters is amazing.

I like it :) I just think it would look better if you centered the text but it doesn't really matter either way, the content is amazing and I'm looking forward to more.

Crank and Glass were amazing, but Burn was definitely my favorite. Looking forward to this!