Dagger - Comments

@ pelican park.
That's cool! I wrote this four years ago and didn't edit it so.... Yeah. Also it's about twilight which has cliches so that's a little boring. Check out my other stories! Let me know if they make sense :P

@ pelican park.
That's cool! I wrote this four years ago and didn't edit it so.... Yeah. Also it's about twilight which has cliches so that's a little boring. Check out my other stories! Let me know if they make sense :P

Oh I get it now!

I wasn't a huge fan because I thought it was confusing but I'm sure you're a great writer!

@ pelican park.
He got nabbed by Alice because they knew what Bella had done. They took him back, almost dead and turned him into a vampire.

What did you think of the story?

Wait Edward got kidnapped at the end? That was really weird