Finding My Way Home - Comments

Wait so is she dead? Or is this like pretty little liars?

Please let her be okay and let them have a happily ever after. It's so sad right now!!

please update i need to know what is in the box!!!

I'm now thinking she is alive, her mom saw her too. I have one question though what is in that box?

whats it the box

I'm holding out hope she is alive, but then again something downright tragic has to have happened to let her think its okay to let her love ones live thinking she is dead

LOVE THIS STORY! I like how as soon as you think he isn't getting over her, he relapses and just has moments where he thinks about her. Can't wait for an update. :)

Your welcome, I am one of those writers who is obsesive over details and get frustrated when my mind is seeing one thing and my fingers are typing another. Can't wait to find out if maybe that girl is Cassie (who possibly was not dead) or a long lost twin or just someone that looks like the girl. Keep up the good work!

love it great start

Ooh love this already. Great start. Can't wait to see where it goes.

Great start, I'd think the only thing I'd suggest is putting an extra line between paragraphs, it will make it easier to read. Then again that is just something I'd do, and not everyone else does.

Great start, I'd think the only thing I'd suggest is putting an extra line between paragraphs, it will make it easier to read. Then again that is just something I'd do, and not everyone else does.

my names ashley btw

my names ashley btw

interesting plot. Excited to see where it goes