The White Room - Comments

I'm actually incredibly interested in what's gonna happen as this story goes on.
It's making me wonder what he has in store for them.
Like, he doesn't seem to really want to hurt them so far.
And having them write isn't exactly what you'd typically expect in a hostage situation.
I almost get the feeling that his intentions are not exactly evil?
Like, yeah, he's got to be a little bit messed up for kidnapping them in the first place, but I just get this feeling that he's not your typical kidnapper criminal dude.
Am I making sense? I'm kind of rambling at this point.
I just really love this story so far.
Also, I think your writing is absolutely great.
Really.
Just a suggestion, you can take this idea and run with it or do whatever, but I almost think this story could benefit from some more figurative language, y'know?
Weird metaphors and descriptions of things in a way that you normally wouldn't expect.
Okay, now I'm probably really confusing you.
I'm really looking forward to reading more!

I really like this story! :)

Ohhhhh man I love this story :D

I have to agree with the others, I hope you find the time to write more of this because this one really pulled me in. I wonder why the rooms are white, and why the man had taken these girls into that room.

So many questions!!! And I love how the layout and banner work around the story :)

Great work and I'm also subscribing :)

I absolutely love this story already! I hope you find a lot of inspiration and update this frequently because I don't know if I can wait to find out what happens next ;)

Duuude. Best banner picture thingy ever....