Undergrowth - Comments

Another fantastic update, this is really dragging me into it. Keep up the good work.

This is actually quite freaky already. The way you're capturing everything is brilliant and it's dragged me into this already. Your style of writing is fantastic as well. You've really got just the right amount of detail for this so far. I'm jealous of how well you're writing a horror/thriller, it's very tricky to write (as I'm experiencing myself) horror/thriller stories and you're doing a great job and that's coming from someone who's very picky when it comes to this genre.

The layout and banner for this is gorgeous! It really captures and fits in with the story and the genre. You've got yourself a new subscriber and reader. I'm looking forward to see this progress. Great job :)

Okay, so this is super freaky and super interesting at the same time. The idea that these to siblings are killing people is super super neat. I'm really curious to see how they lure their victims. I'll definitely be reading more of this because I'm so subscribing!

Okay, freaking hell this layout and bunner is so gorgeous that I'm finding it hard to cope. I suck at both of those things.

Intense start that I love so, so much. You know I love you and would totally embellish because of that, but I'm seriously telling you this is brilliant. Brilliant!

The characters are compelling and I'm so interested to read more. I will be waiting like a crazy stalker for the next update.

This is beautiful!
I love it, the layout, the writing, it's seriously beautiful!

I'm very much intrigued by this story.

Omfg. This is seriously fascinating. I love the idea of sibling serial killers. I want to know their method. How they kill and how they choose their victims. I'm so stoked to see what you have come up with.

I like that it's kind of a cabin in the woods type of deal. Murders like that seem like they should always go as planned but can seriously backfire. There are so many utensils and ways to use it to your advantage you know?

Also love the layout, very beautiful. XD Can't wait to see what you come up with darling.

Omfg. This is seriously fascinating. I love the idea of sibling serial killers. I want to know their method. How they kill and how they choose their victims. I'm so stoked to see what you have come up with.

I like that it's kind of a cabin in the woods type of deal. Murders like that seem like they should always go as planned but can seriously backfire. There are so many utensils and ways to use it to your advantage you know?

Also love the layout, very beautiful. XD Can't wait to see what you come up with darling.

this is eerie and scary and sheer brilliance so far
obviously though because you wrote it like everything you write is fabulous let's be honest here
and okay I just reread the summary again and wowza am I excited or what
I hope you update soon because I am digging this