The Business Man's Chef - Comments

yurio (100)

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Ugh at least he remembers Nixon. I thought he'd forget about him all together.

February 26th, 2014 at 03:11am

jackmerrikat (100)

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i won't be able to wait for the next update

February 23rd, 2014 at 10:48pm

demongirl1243 (100)

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Lol it's okay. But when I read it last night I was all like "where the fuck he go?!" Lol I've done that before so it's cool lol

January 11th, 2014 at 06:50am

rachie-smachie (100)

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Hi everyone!! I kind if fucked up on the last chapter (20) I added onto it so it would go with the previous chapter, if you want to the first paragraph was added in!! Sorry about the inconvenience

January 11th, 2014 at 05:47am

rachie-smachie (100)

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@ demongirl1243
Oh my god!!! I'm so stupid!!! Ahh sorry!! I'm just going to say he went for a walk or some shit. Sorry for fucking it up if you expected something great ahhhh!! I'll edit it right now

January 11th, 2014 at 05:33am

demongirl1243 (100)

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But I thought he went missing last chapter?!?

January 11th, 2014 at 05:02am

Sarcastically Blunt (100)

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@rachie-smachie
It's quite alright. The fight is still filled with enough pathos to get the point across.

January 6th, 2014 at 06:08am

rachie-smachie (100)

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@ Sarcastically Blunt
It was going to be better, but after I lost my first draft which did have a better fight, I forgot details about the fight and kind of have up, sorry to disappoint...

January 6th, 2014 at 02:17am