December 27th, 2013 at 05:34am
The descriptions of the sea are just absolutely beautiful and vivid - I could see it perfectly. I also loved the way you effortlessly tied the sea imagery into their relationship. Despite how sad the story is, I felt hopeful at the end because of Dylan, and that was such a nice touch. This is an amazing piece!
I love this drabble so much that I'm going to feature it in my drabble column in the Mibba Magazine
Thanks!