Me, You - Comments

I LOVE THIS

The last paragraph was so poetical, it could easily belong to a book. It's official, Lou and John have my heart.

It's safe to say I'm already in love with this story. Can't wait to see where it goes!

oh my god i'm so excited more pls

I'm excited and afraid of how meeting her father will happen.
I'm jealous of John and Lou's summer, it seems so fun already.

This story is so cute and so well writing! I'm excited for more :)

Whoaa! 1, I really wanted "You can kiss me.” John leaned in, sticking his tongue out" to happen! 2. Ok, I'm so excited for Lou and this thing with her father.
Keep writing.

Holy shit! John and Lou road trip to Albany in the future? I'm excited for what's to come in this story!

Oh I see a lot of potential in this story. Your characters are full of charisma, I already like them. Lou and John, John and Lou follow the same best friends' dinamic I loved to read in "One Day" by David Nicholls, so you got me as a faithful reader :)
ps: I'm adding some of these things for my bucket list

Oh my fucking.... Lou and John. John and Lou. They're....perfect! I do hope so it will be some love story, but.... oh, they're so funny, and I need an adventure!
Great job, can't wait for more!

Oh my fucking.... Lou and John. John and Lou. They're....perfect! I do hope so it will be some love story, but.... oh, they're so funny, and I need an adventure!
Great job, can't wait for more!