March 22nd, 2014 at 05:37pm
i do think you should include more of alex's point of view.
i want to know how jack looks to him.
also, i think they should have their first kiss/kisses in the next chapter but idk about full on smut?? kissing would be adorable though!
Thanks yeah I was thinking of doing more in Alex's POV and I just don't want y'all getting impatient fir the sexiness...thanks for commenting :)