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  • underapapermoon.

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    I'm not gonna lie I cried a lot. very beautiful and touching story.
    June 13th, 2015 at 05:58am
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    I'm not gonna lie I cried a lot. very beautiful and touching story.
    June 13th, 2015 at 05:58am
  • sermonadarling

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    I have never connected so emotionally to a story than I did with this one and that is the biggest compliment I personally can give. The ending chapters were just so beautiful. At first I questioned the speed of the relationship but you were totally correct about it being necessary. Also, you really shouldn't fell obliged to apologize so much in the authors notes because honestly as long as the story remains realistic and if the details are relatively small I couldn't care less about inaccuracies in a story and I know that's the case with many others too. Especially if it a relatively small detail like the pool. But anyways, I loved this so much and can't wait to read more of your stuff!
    August 11th, 2014 at 07:19am
  • Rawr.Kid.93

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    Awww I love this story so much :)
    January 30th, 2014 at 08:57pm
  • MoMo_92

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    This ending was sad but I'm glad tht u made Josh reading the letter the ending :)
    January 20th, 2014 at 05:33am
  • Alice Verney

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    Awwwww poor josh but I'm happy you did that for the ending
    January 19th, 2014 at 10:29pm
  • Rachel-Marie

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    You made me cry. Thanks a lot! So wonderfully written, and I'm sure the final chapter will make me just as emotional.
    January 15th, 2014 at 07:39pm
  • MoMo_92

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    So sad :( can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)
    January 11th, 2014 at 10:51am
  • MoMo_92

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    This is gettin sadder by the minute can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)
    January 9th, 2014 at 09:55pm
  • MoMo_92

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    Love it Josh u r so stubborn can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)
    January 6th, 2014 at 05:45pm
  • kassadilla

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    My heart is breaking.
    January 6th, 2014 at 07:27am
  • Alice Verney

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    holy balls... go mckinley but damn josh is stubborn but i like how mckinley saw her cancer as a friend instead of soemthing
    January 6th, 2014 at 06:07am
  • MoMo_92

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    I knew it omg I so knew it, anyhoo great story can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)
    January 4th, 2014 at 09:25pm
  • PS_itsbrooke

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    Holy... :o I didnt see that coming. Love it!! :)
    January 4th, 2014 at 08:50am
  • Alice Verney

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    damn didnt see josh being so much like a puppy but i like it and not gonna lie im rooting for mckinley i like her spunky attitude.... lets see where the two of them go now ... :)
    January 4th, 2014 at 05:50am
  • Porcelain Black

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    please update this, I looooove it
    December 30th, 2013 at 08:57am
  • Minnesota518

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    THis is so cute but I have the overwhelming feeling that she is terminally ill and I just don't want that to be the case. Either way, I'm subscribing and I hope to see an update soon!
    December 29th, 2013 at 06:24am
  • KareBearIsDead!

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    Ohhh joshy boyyy lol I love this story =)
    December 3rd, 2013 at 04:59am
  • KareBearIsDead!

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    Liking it so far =) Josh is a cutie pie lol
    December 2nd, 2013 at 05:29am