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  • joyandhorror

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    Ps. That was awesome. Jack can't die, can he?
    May 13th, 2008 at 11:37pm
  • joyandhorror

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    omfg omfg.
    I LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE TORCHWOOD.

    Jack and Ianto just give me butterflies :]
    May 13th, 2008 at 11:36pm
  • Robbie Williams

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    AWESOOMMEEEEE :cry:

    I lovee this :arms: JACK/IANTO FTW! Wow

    Its amazing Jack/John :hug:
    May 13th, 2008 at 11:28pm
  • mon_visage

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    Wow
    That was really good.
    I like how short it was, that helped make a bigger impact on the reader.
    I also like how the suspense was built up, and how we as readers knew what he was thinking at the time.
    It was an interesting way of writing and one that was really effective.
    I also liked the last sentence - it finished off the story well and you could tell that the story was over.
    <33
    (Oh and this is Lea/Mrs Paul Way. from INO in case you're wondering)
    May 13th, 2008 at 11:26pm
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