Little Bird - Comments

jesus christ. (105)

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this reminds me of the book the end of alice, if you guys haven't read it, you should. it's incredible!

March 9th, 2014 at 02:53am

Lenadeljohnson (100)

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I love this, it's amazing !

January 20th, 2014 at 12:06am

Lenadeljohnson (100)

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I love this, it's amazing !

January 20th, 2014 at 12:06am

orange county. (150)

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Merry Christmas!

I love anything with a little French in it, I have to admit. The paedophilic tones have such an effect on me, like, I got shivers reading this. The way he seems to crave her makes my skin crawl a little and it's strange how wording that could be sweet and even romantic in anther context can have that effect!

December 21st, 2013 at 10:34pm

January Rose (100)

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I loved how the chapter was told through the man's pov. Great update!

December 6th, 2013 at 01:01am

darkaly (100)

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I'm insanely obsessed with this already

December 5th, 2013 at 07:07pm

diaryofawitness (100)

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I am a big fan of Lolita. Continue the legacy!

December 5th, 2013 at 05:51am

Alsoldey (230)

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Wow this is so good!

December 3rd, 2013 at 07:57pm

January Rose (100)

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So far I really like this story. Even though the little girl is doomed, she is so sweet and I can't help but fall in love with her. I love the French touch and I understood most words.
Great job you guys and please update soon!

December 3rd, 2013 at 05:14pm