I love anything with a little French in it, I have to admit. The paedophilic tones have such an effect on me, like, I got shivers reading this. The way he seems to crave her makes my skin crawl a little and it's strange how wording that could be sweet and even romantic in anther context can have that effect!
So far I really like this story. Even though the little girl is doomed, she is so sweet and I can't help but fall in love with her. I love the French touch and I understood most words. Great job you guys and please update soon!