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  • Xxsabrinaxx11

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    Very good story so far, I would love to see more. It's interesting how he never judged her for what she told him and how he still wants to get to know her. Eventually i hope they will be good for each other and how sarcastic you were with the way they talked to each aha made me laugh lol keep up the good work.
    February 20th, 2016 at 09:25pm
  • maddiecaps

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    I love this please update
    April 13th, 2014 at 02:54am
  • Hazzie

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    Just by reading a few parts of the first chapter, I can tell i'm gonna love it ! :)
    February 24th, 2014 at 08:34pm
  • Thatmom

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    Great chapter!!!
    January 27th, 2014 at 01:02pm
  • synonymforsarcasm

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    : ) kind of reminds me a bit of one of Nicholas sparks novels
    January 27th, 2014 at 06:16am
  • Thatmom

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    Glad she escaped her abuser!!
    December 24th, 2013 at 01:29pm
  • apocketfulofposy

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    Just found this. Great first two chapters. Can't wait to see where it goes next.
    December 8th, 2013 at 12:54pm
  • Awesome-tacular-ness

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    more more more more more more. Otherwise I'm going to be mean about it. Go. Write. Now. (Please?)
    December 5th, 2013 at 02:53am
  • errolsam123

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    Punch,punch, update time ha ha
    December 4th, 2013 at 09:35pm
  • errolsam123

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    Punch,punch, update time ha ha
    December 4th, 2013 at 09:35pm
  • errolsam123

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    Please update soon, your writing is easy to believe and I am intrigued. Thanks for writing.
    December 4th, 2013 at 09:35pm
  • Thatmom

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    Great start!! I definitely want more:)
    December 4th, 2013 at 11:41am
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