December 5th, 2013 at 02:37am
So, this was really cute, and I liked the sex scene just because of the realistic pain, him finishing kinda fast, and her being embarrassed afterword, cause that's, like, exactly what happened my first time.
Everything else did seem a little rushed, and I can understand wanting to get to the "good part", but possibly a little more detail next time?
I also really liked the beginning with him throwing paper in her hair. That's definitely something Jim would do.
Thanks!
Thanks! I did kind of rush... Lol I was writing it as I cleaned the house and got ready for work. Glad you enjoyed!