Dearly Departed - Comments

Is this story done? I saw Crystel's account wasn't active anymore and so wah. I hope you guys can continue this somehow!

I love it. Can't wait for the next chapter. :)

Wow, I actually really enjoyed this, your description (since I love description) was perfect in my opinion, you captured everything amazingly, the flow was good and i like the story line as well. Also I like you layout and especially your banner. :)

well...I am no fan of One Direction, much less Harry Styles, but I do like zombies :) I was a little worried about this story because it's combining something I love and something that I am very tired of hearing about, haha, but you wrote this very well. It was beautifully crafted. I love that you give so much description! bravo on that, and I like your characters, especially Rose, she seems very cool thus far. This will be the only Harry Styles fan-fic that I will, likely, ever subscribe to. Oh! I did find one itsy bitsy teeny weeny mistake

"Her noise scrunched up at the horrible stench"

Obviously you meant "nose" This is a minor mistake, not very distracting at all. Keep up the fantastic work! You are an uber talented writer.

Love this!!

PLEASE update this soon! I am literally obsessed with zombies and Harry Styles...so this story is just PERFECT! I LOVE IT! <3 I seriously cannot wait to read more! Hoooray!