Limitless - Comments

Dear author,
I'm here to read this entry for my Quotes used as Summaries Contest.

Let me start off by saying that I like the background of this and it fits with the rest of the layout. What I didn't like was the wide box of the text. Other than that, there's nothing else I can say about the layout.

I would have liked to see a summary written by you even if it was two lines. Yes, there is a quote but I wanted to read something you wrote which would make me want to read this and get my attention.

As for the chapter 1/1, I know this is fanfiction but I read it as an original fiction (before checking to see the type) in order to be honest while commenting and not favor the fandom. I adore the deepness of the narrators thoughts, his honest as he keeps thinking between the women he had and that special someone, the definition of being homosexual and why he was one.

The ending made a great impact on my mind as well as the character you managed to portray. The slight mystery behind the other person and how much the narrator loved him. This great, GRAND if I may say. Plus, the ending blew me away.

I give this piece 9.5 out of ten writing pens, only because you could have added a bit more to the summary. No points taken off from the layout because that's just my own preference and I'm here to see your writing skills.

Thank you very much for your entry. Don't forget to check the contest later today to see the results. Good luck!

-Marian.

@ waves
Thank you and it does make sense to me. ^_^ I like the idea of "spontaneous love," if I were to quote a friend. I'm glad you liked it!

I think this really was pretty cool because the lines are blurred for a lot of people, and for some - it just happens out of the blue. I think this was a nicely written way of showing some of the confusion that's brought about by the "assumptions" made by society and public, if that makes any type of sense at all.

Okay :)

@ FallenCreature
Thanks Doll, you should read this one's sister/brother one shot too. The don't appear to have anything to do with each other, but this one is about the guy he's talking about.

This is cool :) xo

:D I loved it <333