I think Lily should be nicer to Tilly and be her friend! She could protect Tilly and maybe they could get the guys to turn them human again! The girls could make a plan to run away and be human again! Update soon!
I hope you can write a bit more on this as it is a really good concept. There are a few spelling errors here and there but I'm only mentioning it to be helpful. I hope you're not offended. Xx
Please update soon xx