Disturb the Peace - Comments

Hi!
Okay, first off, I don’t really like Lydia as much as I loved Everly and Erin. And Zayn…well, he isn’t as adorable as Dylan and Joshua were. Don’t get me wrong, he’s good, but when compared to your other two leads, he kinda loses (for me atleast haha).
Anyway, the layout for this one is cuter, and the plot is just – wow. I mean, the hate thing is something I enjoy a lot in romance stories. And its even better if it continues for at least ten chapter LOL. I’m an idiot.
This is very beautifully written, and again, the characters are so well portrayed. I liked Grace, she was sweet. Very well done on this one too. Definitely subscribing. (:

Hi!
Okay, first off, I don’t really like Lydia as much as I loved Everly and Erin. And Zayn…well, he isn’t as adorable as Dylan and Joshua were. Don’t get me wrong, he’s good, but when compared to your other two leads, he kinda loses (for me atleast haha).
Anyway, the layout for this one is cuter, and the plot is just – wow. I mean, the hate thing is something I enjoy a lot in romance stories. And its even better if it continues for at least ten chapter LOL. I’m an idiot.
This is very beautifully written, and again, the characters are so well portrayed. I liked Grace, she was sweet. Very well done on this one too. Definitely subscribing. (:

Oh lord that ending was perfect! Ugh I love Lydia and Zayn so much. They are my all time favorite couple!

Well first off, I love the chapter titles :] I also like the sense of humor the characters have. I hate reading stories where the characters are just bleehhhhhh, one-note things but Lydia has a lot of personality. she was tough and flirty but a tad naive at the same time. I'm not really a fan of One Direction but I do think Zayn is the cutest one of the group. As for your writing style, it flows really well and is easy to read, just the right amount of dialogue. :]

OHMYGOODLORD THIS STORY WAS PHENOMENAL.
Zayn and Lydia are quite the crazy pair.. I never wanted this to end!

That ending was just perfect. I don't think you realize what you did to me with this story. Just amazing.

Aww I didn't think the ending was coming, I love the happy ending though! He's so sweet. I think this story was the right length for is to see where both characters were coming from and appreciate the fact that they are now together.

N'awwwww! So precious! I love sweet Zayn! I'm a sucker for happy endings

Freakin adorable!! I love that they're progressing and he's being so protective. He knows he messed up in the past

OMFG MY ZAYN FEELS!!!!

He was totally sexy staying up for her, and totally adorable admitting he was stupid for hurting her in the past. I mean can we take a moment to just bask in the amazing thing that is chapter 8

I love your stories! And how well you write them. Ugh Zayn and Dylan just give me so many feels!!

OH MY GOODNESS ZAYN DEFENDING HER - HOTTEST THING EVER.
He could get in a fight over me any day of the week. Sexiest thing on the planet.
He's adorable and perfect. I want one.

OH MY GOD IT FINALLY HAPPENENED YES
lyds and zaynie admitted their feelings ooh

Nooooooo I want more dammit!

Okay, this was good, really good I'm hooked, gah, you're such a talented writer!!

Ugh! About damn time! I'm looking forward to the arguing that is sure to happen when they're an actual couple. :D

finally! now, Lydia, just don't get scared and run away again.

OMG stop it! that was freaking perfect. I hope she doesn't revert back

OMG stop it! that was freaking perfect. I hope she doesn't revert back

OH MY GOD ZAYN THAT WAS SO FREAKING CUTE
And those kisses at the end? Is it hot in here or is it just me?
He totally hit the nail on the head with her, I think. It's easier with no feelings so you can't get hurt. I love that he called her out on that.
This chapter was perfect like you.

OMG my goodness!!
Well she wouldn't just fall into him automatically. It's a defense mechanism

oh Lydia. you frustrate me so. Zayn is trying. stop being a little bitch and love him already. ugh.