Madeline - Comments

Love it. Creepy dark things are just my thing okay? And you hit it right on the nail. It reminded me of some weird cannibal movie on Netflix I've watched a couple times. Along with my interest in cannibalism, your writing is so beautiful and I love how clearly you described everything. From the whisky glass to Mary Jane's head set on a platter.

That last chapter. Nice. I love it! I presume that it's done but I subscribed anyway. :))

@ silk tea.
Wow, this is shell shock. I absolutely adore your writing.

Thank you and I agree with the whole 'hot' thing as I read back over it.

So the first chapter totally made me think of Ian Mckellan and Patrick Stewart sitting in a pub sharing stories. No clue why, it's mainly the fact that they kept talking about how old they apparently were.

The only issue I have is calling Madeline 'hot' it doesn't fit in with the rest of your wording. Everything else is so eloquently written and it just sounds so majestic, that word just throws it all off.

Ugh, seriously disturbed family though. Bleck. Lovely job.