Christmas Chemistry - Comments

@ mrsmshadz
I never wrote the actual conversation, but Brian also comments on how she talks a lot when she's nervous, so it is implied that they had a conversation while he was patching her up and she mentioned Mr. Wrong because of her habit of nervous talking.

In chapter 2, Brian says she mentioned to him about Mr. Wrong when he was playing doctor with her. But she didn't mention it at all. Curious as to how he found out.

I can't wait for the sequel. I personally don't a problem with the title. The story takes place at Christmas.

I am so glad you were able to update! These last 2 chapters were perfect and so sweet. I would have liked to read how Christmas went with everyone, especially with Olivia's rambling when she's nervous, but in my head I can imagine it was hilarious and perfect. Looking forward to the sequel! AND I HOPE YOU UPDATE YOUR OTHER STORIES SOON TOO! <333

I love this story and can't wait for the sequel! I think you should leave the title as is. I like it and don't care that it's the end of February. I love Christmas and it adds a touch of magic to the story.

Looking forward to the sequel xx

I just love Nora. She's so cute. Olivia quit her job! I wasn't expecting that.

Loved this. I hope Delilah gets with Matt. Please update soon xx

Loved the update

@ pawnsinplay
At first I just used the names because I needed something. Then I realized the silliness and laughed but thought about changing it. Then I said to hell with it and kept them.

That really was sad . Poor Delilah! Liv's right though, her husband would want her to be happy. I hope she finds that happiness with Matt. Please update soon xx

Poor Delilah. She does need to move on at some point though, not only for her own sake but for Nora's. And for Olivia too. I have to say I laughed a little at the names Jack and Sally...don't know if you did it on purpose or not but it reminded me of The Nightmare Before Christmas, which is one of my favourite Christmas movies haha. And damn it! Why is Brian always so perfect?! I loved this, as always. Hope you're feeling better <3

Great story. Found this today and read some of it this morning before work, and I've just caught up. I'm looking forward to reading more of this so I hope you can update again soon. Also, I hope you do go on to write a sequel to this. Xx

Loved the update

I loved this update. I'm glad Brian saved her. Maxwell is a nut job and I'm glad he's gotten arrested. I'm so excited for the next chapters and the sequel. I can't wait to see where everything goes and how it all comes together in the end. You're an awesome writer, I'm totally jealous.

You have NO IDEA how I squealed when I got the email that this had been updated, I was sure I woke the whole darn house! I was so excited, I don't think I paid attention to what I was reading at first haha so I read it again. I knew he would save her! Thank you for updating! <3333333

Terrible two's haha! I have a nephew who's almost 2 now and remembering what that was like with my other nephews and niece makes me very excited :/ Take care of yourself! I hope you feel better soon. If you need any help with anything on here, let me know, I'll be happy to help any way I can <3

@ pawnsinplay
You weren't nagging. I've been kicking my own butt. But I have an almost 2 year old here at home and I've had an awful cold for 2 and a half weeks so it's been pretty shitty in my house.

@ pawnsinplay
You weren't nagging. I've been kicking my own butt. But I have an almost 2 year old here at home and I've had an awful cold for 2 and a half weeks so it's been pretty shitty in my house.

No worries! I know how that is so no need to rush. Sorry if I sounded like a bag or like I was nagging, I was just re-reading some favourite stories over the past few days and had to comment again lol :)

@ pawnsinplay
I know! I'm so sorry! I'm working on the next chapter but it's been crazy busy and the chapter and words just aren't flowing well. I'll have it up soon. I promise.