Maybe Fate? - Comments

comment swap :)
so far I've only been able to read the first two chapters but they're really good and i will be reading the rest. I love the way all the character come across as being really genuine (if that makes sense?) and i agree Josh Hutcherson was a good choice for the story. I'm pretty sure as i read on that the age gap between Josh and Daniella will become a major part of the story or something but it just seems really big 14-21.
I liked that the length of chapters wasn't so long that it got boring but still had enough detail in to keep the story interesting, but maybe try and break up your paragraphs a little more to make it easier to read.
I really enjoyed this so far and can't wait to read on :)

So, I came from comment swap and I have to say I love this. J-Hutch? Good choice!! He is so swoon worthy! :) Anyways, this is really good! Have you seen Catching Fire? :)

Love it! I think you're plot is fantastic!
But just a little suggestion-maybe change your background? It's a little hard to read-or just bold the text whichever is better! :)
And also, break your story up a little, don't make it all one big paragraph it'll b easier to read that way!
I really like this so far though! Can't wait to read more of it! :)