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  • somethingpoetic

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    haha thank you!!
    March 23rd, 2014 at 01:13am
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    ayyyyy welcome back!! ! love this update, truly emotional. your characterizations are splendid<3
    March 22nd, 2014 at 08:52pm
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    @we-wish-the-morrow thank you!! That comment really made me happy :D I"ve been working on other things, but I'll try to update this story soon
    March 22nd, 2014 at 05:41am
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    This story's so well-written and the imagery is beautiful. I love your writing style. C:
    March 18th, 2014 at 02:00pm
  • somethingpoetic

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    Thank you so much!! I'll try!
    February 20th, 2014 at 02:08am
  • Katt eyes

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    this is really good, please update as soon as you can :)
    February 18th, 2014 at 02:13pm
  • somethingpoetic

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    @ShotToRemember <3
    @daynalloyd1998 thank you!!
    February 17th, 2014 at 07:56pm
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    holy fuck,..!
    February 17th, 2014 at 02:27am
  • daynalloyd1998

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    Please update!!! This is fucking amazing, and I reallllly like the idea.
    January 29th, 2014 at 07:37am
  • ShotToRemember

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    frannnnnkkk.... why would you just leave? ugh. poor gerard.

    anyhow, i'm worried about what's gonna happen when frank gets home:E pls update soon!!
    January 1st, 2014 at 12:45am
  • somethingpoetic

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    thank you soo much! really it means a lot. & I'll be updating more frequently now
    December 30th, 2013 at 08:12am
  • ShotToRemember

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    uh oh gerardXD haha that was reallyXD hot, I love the drunken whirliness of your writing for it, if that makes any sense. anyhow please update soon, this story is super fantastic and deserves much more attention than you're getting!
    December 30th, 2013 at 05:11am
  • somethingpoetic

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    @ShotToRemember <3 I'll be updating soon!
    December 27th, 2013 at 04:46am
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    Eeee!! Gee!!!XD I love you and I need another update!!
    December 17th, 2013 at 12:52am
  • somethingpoetic

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    @FonetikFrases Thank you!! <3
    and @ShotToRemember maybe maybe not ;) and about the writing, thank you! I'm always worried its too cryptic, so thanks for the positive feedback <3 and no problem!
    December 16th, 2013 at 02:25am
  • ShotToRemember

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    Oh my god!! So good! That was gerard right?? Right??! Eeeeeee I need to know!! Poor Frankie. I love the way you write his depression without clearly saying things about it. Like.. just saying "she left him standing in the rain. Again" or whatever it was you said (too lazy n excited to look it up) makes it so Fukkin clear! Keep writing, I can't wait for the next update! Ohh and thanks for taking my advice!!!
    December 15th, 2013 at 09:22am
  • howellfornia

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    This is so good, I'm excited to see what you do with it!
    December 13th, 2013 at 11:24pm
  • somethingpoetic

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    @ShotToRemember, oh thanks for letting me know about the title! I'll find a new one soon. And thank you and @lizzicleromance both!
    December 11th, 2013 at 01:01am
  • lizzicleromance

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    I like this so much!!! I am super excited for the next update :)
    December 10th, 2013 at 09:39pm
  • ShotToRemember

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    Oh my god poor Frankie!!! I love the way you're writing this btw! The only suggestion I have besides maybe changing the title is double entering between paragraphs so it's a little easier to read. Anyhow I can't wait for the next update so pls another soon??
    December 10th, 2013 at 02:42pm