Complications - Comments

HOLYMOLY THIS IS SO GOOD OMG PLEASEUPDTAE SOON AAAH THIS IS SO AMAZING OKAY YOU ARE SO SUPER TALENTED AND THIS IS PERFECT

To answer your question your story was at the bottom of my emails list but it just means that you upadated first so I was like "Fuenciado updated huh? Will Jaime get in Vic's pants huh?" ahah. :')
Holy fucking green guacamole this chapter is fucking greaaaaat! **

Holy fuck I almost fangirl when you update <3 this story is so great!

Ahaha you just described me right now!! I get excited when a story is updated (:
Omfg you have to update real soon!! You can't leave me hanging girrlll!

I get excited when anyone updates because it means that they're giving up their time to make strangers on the internet happy :)

This is my first time reading a fuenciado and holy shit now they're my OTP

Yes! So much fucking yes! I loved this!!!!

@ ADayWithGracie
They're basically a violent version of Westboro Baptist Church...so if you consider that a cult, then yes :P

omfg
Is that like a cult of some sort :o

@ bara-kitten
Trust me, that's verrryy important for later on in the story. I have to kind of introduce them before I have them wreak havoc, you know?

whaT THE HECKIE IS UP WITH THE LAST HALF OF THAT CHAPTER MAN???
That confused the hell out of me, but I like it.

I like this chapter a lot idk why but I really do. <3
Keep it up~

Love this story! Been reading since the beginning! I've decided to stop lurking and comment lol!<3 I think it's really great! I'll stick with it until the end I'm hella interested and am starting to be as addicted to reading this fic as i am addicted to drinking coffee!

Love this story! Been reading since the beginning! I've decided to stop lurking and comment lol!<3 I think it's really great! I'll stick with it until the end I'm hella interested and am starting to be as addicted to reading this fic as i am addicted to drinking coffee!

This chapter made me happy and sad at the same time. I felt bad for Jaime because he doesn't deserve the letter thing, even if he is a bully, but then realizing that it allowed him to open up to Vic slightly made me happy because maybe they're getting somewhere, ya know?

I like how you included Jaime's view in this chapter! I thought it was well written!

I really liked this last chapter, I don't really know why. Maybe because we learned a little more about Vic? Maybe because Jaime's still a little douchecanoe that doesn't really know how to be respectful? I don't know, but I really liked it. When Vic said something about his dad forcing him and Jaime together, I was thinking to myself "yeah, that's reasonable. It's not going to fix anything."
Keep up the good work. c:

I love your progression throughout the story. It's very intriguing and I like how you're taking your time with it! Lovely chapter!

@ bara-kitten
Thank you for the boost of confidence! :D
And I wasn't going to, trust me. (: It always made me mad when I read a fanfic and one of the main characters suddenly does a completely 180 in their personality practically overnight. But again, thank you! <3

Don't feel like you did something bad by making Jaime an ass. I like it. A lot. It's unique, because it's usually Vic being the bully and Jaime being the quiet kid. Take risks, mang, it makes for a better story.
Don't suddenly make Jaime nice to Vic, even if this is a Fuenciado. Make them slowly warm up to each other. Just 'cause some people don't like asshole Jaime doesn't mean others don't. c': Can't wait for more.