To answer your question your story was at the bottom of my emails list but it just means that you upadated first so I was like "Fuenciado updated huh? Will Jaime get in Vic's pants huh?" ahah. :') Holy fucking green guacamole this chapter is fucking greaaaaat! **
Ahaha you just described me right now!! I get excited when a story is updated (: Omfg you have to update real soon!! You can't leave me hanging girrlll!
Love this story! Been reading since the beginning! I've decided to stop lurking and comment lol!<3 I think it's really great! I'll stick with it until the end I'm hella interested and am starting to be as addicted to reading this fic as i am addicted to drinking coffee!
Love this story! Been reading since the beginning! I've decided to stop lurking and comment lol!<3 I think it's really great! I'll stick with it until the end I'm hella interested and am starting to be as addicted to reading this fic as i am addicted to drinking coffee!
This chapter made me happy and sad at the same time. I felt bad for Jaime because he doesn't deserve the letter thing, even if he is a bully, but then realizing that it allowed him to open up to Vic slightly made me happy because maybe they're getting somewhere, ya know?
I really liked this last chapter, I don't really know why. Maybe because we learned a little more about Vic? Maybe because Jaime's still a little douchecanoe that doesn't really know how to be respectful? I don't know, but I really liked it. When Vic said something about his dad forcing him and Jaime together, I was thinking to myself "yeah, that's reasonable. It's not going to fix anything." Keep up the good work. c:
@ bara-kitten Thank you for the boost of confidence! :D And I wasn't going to, trust me. (: It always made me mad when I read a fanfic and one of the main characters suddenly does a completely 180 in their personality practically overnight. But again, thank you! <3
Don't feel like you did something bad by making Jaime an ass. I like it. A lot. It's unique, because it's usually Vic being the bully and Jaime being the quiet kid. Take risks, mang, it makes for a better story. Don't suddenly make Jaime nice to Vic, even if this is a Fuenciado. Make them slowly warm up to each other. Just 'cause some people don't like asshole Jaime doesn't mean others don't. c': Can't wait for more.