December 16th, 2013 at 11:14pm
I Can Love You More Than This - Comments
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Try not to adress the reader in order to explain things. It disrupts the flow. Instead try to work facts into dialogue or descriptionsDecember 16th, 2013 at 05:42am
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@ blissfulmelancholy
You're welcome. :)December 16th, 2013 at 01:53am -
@ joeyschick367
@ xiheartwolves
Thanks guys! You're so sweet!
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It's great and very well written! Looking forward to the next chapter :)December 15th, 2013 at 11:55am
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I love it, can't wait for next chapter. (:December 15th, 2013 at 07:49am
ok i will definitely try that :)