despite the very few grammar mistakes, i see potential in this. i don't usually enjoy romance oriented stories on mibba, but this has caught my attention. i like how simple the layout is (easier for my lil old eyes), and the fact we aren't presented with a current love story, but a past one. everything i've read so far in this, is presented in snippets, almost like the slice of life genre and i honestly dig that. keep up the good writing, friend.
July 29th, 2015 at 11:50pm
