Porcelain Doll - Comments

This is so good please continue this

Fantastic!

GODDAMMIT RONALD!
YOU ARE JUST PSYCHOTIC
AND SO ARE YOU, JACKY
BOTH OF YA NEED HELP
SERIOUS MENTAL HELP

O.O.. Bad vibes...

Ronald you frickin stalker

Him and Devin are so frickin' cute together!
Ronnie, I'm still out for your blood >:)

Adorable chapter. :)
Maybe some frickle frackle in the next chapter?
I guess I'll just have to wait until the next chapter.

I can't believe Ronnie killed Devin's parents. He is such a asshole! I don't like evil Ronnie :c I ought to beat Ronnie with an aluminum baseball bat to see how he likes it! UGG! I'm so pissed at him right now! Why can't he leave my baby Devin alone? Anywhore, you ladies are doing a fabulous job on this story! I love you guys! Update when you can!

@Gothsinkingbat
Burned at the stake.
After I beat him with an aluminum baseball bat.

@ Synyster Vengance
Time to be burnt!

O_e...... *creepy voice* Ronnie! Time to diiieeee >:3

All I have to say about this chapter is that I no longer have my ovaries. I loved this update. :D Update when you can loves!

@ OfficerBalz
Dude, yeah.

I'll definitely write more if my co-author hints toward it.

@ TwibbyV6

Damn, now that was a good frickle frackle!
Brilliant job. Oh my god I feel so creepy writing this.
Anyways I hope there will be plenty of more frickle frackle in the future chapters.

@ OfficerBalz
Yes, we try our best!
And maybe you should go find out about that frickle frackle.
By the way that is brilliant I will now got sex frickle frackle.

I love this story....also great chapter! I wonder if they're going to frickle frackle in the next chapter. ;) Lol. I also like it that you update frequently. :)

@ foREVer-a-creature
Awe! I love you two thank you very much for reading!

I wrote Ronnie and Jacky out to be shallow and utterly evil and his father to be judgemental and controlling.

Thanks again!

- TwibbyV6

I just started this story and I had to read until I finished it. I love it! You ladies have me hooked!
I have to say that what Ronnie and Jacky did, was beyond shallow. And the fact that they did it for revenge, it was like a low blow! They deserve to get the fuck beat out of them.
What Devin's dad is doing to him is NOT okay! And he only does it because Devin cross dresses? Come on, that's like beating someone because they are gay! It's just not right.
I don't like that Devin isn't telling the guys what's going on so they can help him. If it was me in his place, I would have told them already, or at least one of them.
The squealed when I read the kiss between Josh and Dev. I loved it! I think my inner fangirl died from a sexiness overload! :D
Anywhore, I have to go to school now. Have a good day! I love you guys! <3 Update when you can! :D :)

The suspense is killing me!

Fucking Jacky and Ronnie. Date rape? That's fucking low, just to get revenge. Fuckin' bastards.