The Finish Line - Comments

OKAY!!!! the two of them need to talk face to face like SERIOUSLY no more tip-toeing around this shit!! Esther needs to stop Louis needs to stop! they both need to stop and TALK!!!!

Great update by the way loving it. Can't wait for the next update :)

Oh man! That was so heart-wrenching. Poor Louis. I wonder what the heck is going on with Esther.
I feel like something is up.
Ugh, poor Louis! he handled that the best he could, I think.
I loved the update, as always!

I feel so bad for Louis :'( all I know is that he needs an explanation as to why she left him! That's one thing I'd really like to know! I just want him to be happy, and I hope things get better!!!
Please update soon! (:

:'( Poor Louis, I really feel for him, I want to know why she left him! Gosh she's being ridiculous! Fingers crossed everything gets better. I hope everything gets better soon. Please update soon, I am loving it.

Poor, poor baby Louis. This is so sad! The way he spoke about her at the end broke my heart.
I really can't wait for more. And for Louis to start feeling better!
Great update!

I'm dying for you to write more, I want him to be able to cheer up.

Love your writing so far!

My heart is breakingggggg.
Oh my God that was so sad but so beautiful.

Oh my gosh my poor baby Louis!
I have been suffering major Louis feels since their SNL performance so when I saw this I got so excited. I can't wait to read what you have for this! I'm sure it's going to be amazing.
But poor Lou - I hug you all better!

Loved it so far!