I remember reading the first one and thinking it was perfect. I couldn't believe how well written and how amazing the concept was. I'm still wrapping my head around the fact that this is better, because I honestly didn't believe it COULD be any better. Well done!
I am just so glad that you have started to write this story again and hope that you keep coming up with new ideas. Hope you have lots of fun and a great time with your updates.
Bad news and good news Bad news: i'm sad because you're writing again and you didn't tell me lol Good news: I'm overjoyed that you are. You've changed it but i will tell you after a few more chapters if it's as good or better then the orignal so far it's 50-50