Memories of You - Comments

  • A. J.

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    @ kaz brekker
    Thank you!!! :D
    December 19th, 2017 at 08:44pm
  • n. josten

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    I’m here as the new host for ‘Same Love Contest’.

    This was a really cute story with a lot of humor. Jon was a really likable character with his sense of humor and nervousness. It was a nice touch for you to have him reminisce about all those times with Dillon because it added more history to their relationship, giving it depth so I could be happy that it wasn’t unrequited after all. Brian and his wife made me laugh, especially Jasmine. You can see years of friendship and love between Brian and Jon in their interactions so it was really nice.

    It was so sweet that they loved each other all along. I actually was amused that Dillon had the key the entire time. That’s definitely an interesting way of declaring your love. You would think that he’d just straight out say he had feelings for Jon since Brian told Dillon that he did without a doubt. It was very Extra™ of him really. Like… “I mean, I could just ask him out since I know he has feelings for me so I don’t have to worry about rejection, but I would much rather just have my brother lock us in a closet instead!” That made me laugh because it’s so dramatic and really, unnecessary. Memorable, though. I’m really glad that Jon got his happy ending.

    All in all, this was a cute and sweet story. Good job.
    July 13th, 2017 at 12:42am
  • A. J.

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    Thank you so much! I'm glad my humor came through and that you thought it was a sweet story :D
    January 9th, 2014 at 11:28pm
  • fiction246

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    I really loved this :) They loved each other all that time!!! Too sweet!! And Dillon having the key all along was hilarious :P
    December 17th, 2013 at 10:14am